5 thoughts on “Poetry Tuesday – Fall

  1. I like it a lot. Nice rhythm, flow. Not in love with the last line. I wish you could show more, without the adjective. You did it it the beginning, colors shadows. I could see it. Splendor doesn’t give me anything to look it. Just sayin’, Others will not agree.

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  2. I think it’s a good poem, nice rhythm, nice flow. I’m not in love with the last line. I would like splendor to be replaced with image. You have done this nicely at the beginning of the poem. Splendor is too easy, doesn’t give me much to see. Others will not agree. Just sayin’.

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