8/7/2019
The cutting–
Empty Boone’s Farm bottles rattled in the back floorboard to the rhythms of lust. She was only twelve when her father abandoned her. Now each night she spent in the back seat was just her attempt to erase him from her memory. Each night was an endless stream of the same old shit as boys, trying hard to act like men, dripped sweat from their foreheads. They took what they could and left her cold and empty. Every night ended with tears soaking her pillow. Each time the razor touched her skin, the scars took a little longer to heal.
So realistic
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Many thanks derrick
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Well written story , Jerry. But so grim, so cruel.
Why, oh why … do commit such cruelty to a woman.
miriam
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Wow. Just wow. Very real. Very gritty. NICE! 👏👏
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An impressive memorial to those compelled to self-harm.
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Thanks Roland, your words are much appreciated.
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Thank you my friend for your support.
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Such tragedy in the world and we whine and cry about such stupid things like term limits, walls and taxes.
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For sure.
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beautiful writing when whats between the lines tell the real story
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Thanks Gina, as always, I appreciate your kind words.
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Wonderfully real and grim.
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Thank you my friend for taking the time to drop by and leaving such kind words.
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The Boone’s Farm bottles was the perfect way to set the scene for this short, impactful story.
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Thanks Liz. That was the drink of choice when I was a lad.
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I remember.
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This one touches deep.
(((HUGS)))
PS…You are the master at writing a short story that is so powerful and heart-touching….you get important messages across with your vivid word-pictures and the emotion felt in each sentence.
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There are no words to express my appreciation for your support and encouragement.
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Powerfully written as always.
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I certainly appreciate your encouraging words of support.
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My pleasure ❤️
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